“The water. I don’t know where I am. I cannot see any people. I am on a land, secluded from everything. No people, no equipment only a dead jungle and caves surrounded. Last thing, I remember was a huge wave striking towards the shore. I thought I was dead while I was drowning. Maybe I am, it’s just heaven, I presume. I never expected heaven to be so isolated. It’s a curse I guess. I have to wait in the coldness of a chance for survival which is very slim. Yet, this is the end.” – A Survivor
***Written for Masters of Writing Flash Fiction Challenge, week 10
Write Mania 
Keep writing like this Abhi, you will grow more 🙂
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Thank you, pia for the encouragement.☺️☺️☺️ I will try to grow more. 😊😊😊.
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Your words are always so loaded with emotions.
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I try to use the emotional factor more to explore the psychology of the character. Try to make them more human.
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Thank you for the praise , ms pramegha. 😊😊😊☺️
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You are welcome
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😊😊😊
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Very Interesting, I like it. It sounds a bit like the character could be experiencing purgatory.
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Exactly. Ms candygothakallisti. You got it right.😊😊😊
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